The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table details fundamental numbers about the underground railway systems in six big metropolises of the world.
Overall, all subways in six financial centers were built before 2000, except for los Angeles . It is obvious that railway systems in European cities such as london and paris are much longer than the rest of the list . Additionally, although Tokyo have a shorter route of railway, the annual number of visitors is considerably higher than other cities.
As can be seen in the table, london which was the first modern city developed its underground railways since 1863 . While other central cities such as paris, Tokyo, washington dc, Kyoto built their metro systems later throughout the 1900s, the latest underground railways were in los Angeles in 2001. there is a fact that the more kilometers railway routes are, the longer they were built. The longest subway route is 394 kilometers in london, followed by paris (199 kilometers), Tokyo (155 kilometers), washington dc (126 kilometers) and Kyoto has the shortest subway system with only 11 kilometers.
In terms of travel, there are 1,927 million travelers visit Tokyo every year, which is considered the largest figure compared to other inner cities. The second metropolis is paris, with 1191 million passengers and the third city, london , welcomes 775 million annual visitors. In the meantime, washington dc, Kyoto, and los Angeles have less than 150 million travelers each city every year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, third, while, except for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2735042735 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55328082892 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0128803993 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201579917315 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844569458512 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100389383982 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163515535953 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133081000295 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.