building a factory in your region?
We all know that the factories are annoying places because of the noise it introduces and the pollutants that it leaves in the air. So the choice of proper region to them is the first and the most important step in the process of building. Personally, I agree to build a factory in my community because of the following reasons, that I will illustrate.
First of all, my country lies in a region away from the people settlements, so I think this is a perfect location for a factory. The factory will deposit huge pollution to the near area, so it affects the health of the people, the gases contain poisonous and harmful chemical materials like coal. Also in some cases, the factory produces noise, which affects the calm environment needed to people. For example, if the government want to establish a factory for producing fuel, this means that there will be many smokes and dirty smell that affect the breathing process for both animals and humans, so they always choose a desert region.
Secondly, opening a new factor will open more opportunity for the young new students to work or train in. The factor will hire more than 100 engineers from different majors, and many people for the administration section. In addition, in my region, there are many unemployment rates of new graduate student. For example, when the government opened a medicine factory in my community last year, they hired huge numbers of students in chemical engineering and in pharmaceutical majors. this helps to reduce the unemployment rate in the region.
In conclusion, I agree with building a factory in my community because I live in a region lies in the border of the country, so their pollution will not harm anyone and will keep the noise away from the settlements.Also, it will reduce the unemployment rate by hiring many people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...gineering and in pharmaceutical majors. this helps to reduce the unemployment rate i...
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...eep the noise away from the settlements.Also, it will reduce the unemployment rate b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83012820513 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75950742813 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.864739056 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211447006973 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831158044706 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495842620141 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148460412394 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469749805098 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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