Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.
These days, people hardly know their neighbors. This essay will discuss some of the causes behind this paradigm shift in our society and propose various solutions to tackle this problem.
The major cause of people knowing less of their neighbors is the busy lifestyle of people. Due to long working hours and hectic schedules at work, people are already striving to maintain work-life balance. It is very hard for individuals to take out time for interacting with their family and even relatives, hence knowing less of neighbors makes sense. In addition, culture also plays a pivotal role when it comes to people knowing their neighbors. For example, the trend of people knowing less of their neighbors is more pronounced in Western societies where people prefer to mind their own businesses as opposed to Asian societies. Moreover, the prevalence of social media has also contributed towards reduced interaction among people. We can see people spending more time on social networking websites like Facebook and Twitter as opposed to face to face interactions.
Some of the ways to handle this problem includes educating people about the benefits of knowing and keeping strong ties with their neighborhood. This is because, people are likely to feel more relaxed when they know and trust their neighbors. In addition, attention must also be given to the better management of work-life balance. Moreover, the importance of face-to-face interaction cannot be ignored and must be stressed within our societies in order to promote a healthy environment.
To recapitulate, culture in addition to the busy life-style of people have contributed towards the trend of people hardly knowing their neighborhood. However, this issue can be solved by employing ways as discussed earlier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31205673759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73621947902 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556737588652 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3814766352 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267051981547 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979570173778 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594815395234 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186558676583 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357593038832 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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