The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, due to the evolution of the technology and social media such as facebook, skype and viber the communicate among people became more easy and cheap. Then people can connect with their loved ones face-to-face even if they are physically living in long distance. As such there are both merits and demerits of this trend, although I am in the opinion that latter out do the former. there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prominent one is that this move negatively could be so destructive which limits and tears down physical relationship among the loved ones and also tend to escalate alienate feeling, as it does it also stripes away the trust and faith between humans.
Moreover, factual evidence of deterioration of faithfulness could be witnessed with the guarantee of this trend. Tangible and intangible online relationships has a ripple effect which lead to paradoxical effects in the family life such as stress and depression. As an example if the spouse works in another country and used to call via social media, their trust and the physical bond will plunged to a stage where the happiness of the family life has lost. also this trend accelerate the privacy issues and catalyst activities like hacking, phishing and blackmailing.
Furthermore, most of us have sense that their are lot of advantages as well as drawbacks. As an example, on previous years, people used to communicate using letters. But with the use of technology, people can communicate and pass ideas very quickly.
To sum up, in the view of the arguments outlined above, I can conclude that despite some drawbacks and disadvantages of this cannot be ignored. As humans we should take the responsiblity that in to what extend we are using the technology in our family life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...way the trust and faith between humans. Moreover, factual evidence of deteriorat...
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...happiness of the family life has lost. also this trend accelerate the privacy issue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94019933555 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76728032935 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6239134426 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210941934999 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611729415537 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362292301806 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108691201155 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388110635159 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.