Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With multiple industries growing forever, we have seen an exponential rise in the amount of unwanted by-products being produced. In various forms such as toxic gases and chemicals, plastics, and other wastes, rubbish is being thrown into pious mother earth every day. If not addressed promptly, the situation will soon reach out of hands and create an irreversible havoc to the existence of the entire humanity. It is of dire need that governments play an active role in controlling the situation.
There are various ways in which rubbish is being produced in our vicinities. Manufacturing companies use various chemical treatments to produce desired product. In the process it created too much of unwanted waste being released. Corporate leaders, in their zeal to achieve high profits, are often ignoring the emphasis required on safe environmental practices. On the other hand, societies have not shouldered enough responsibility in dealing with the wastes being produced. Communities must take up active participation to create social awareness of the consequences. Though in some areas, organizations have taken necessary steps to collect recyclable wastes, there are places where people are not aware of handling these wastes.
Governments must tighten up the regulations, especially for manufacturing companies. Restrictions must be levied on the amount of garbage being produced by these companies, and also on the ways they deal with the waste already produced. In addition to that, they must reward companies that are contributing strongly to reduction of rubbish by subsidising them few necessities. It must create awareness programs to ensure an utmost importance is being portrayed towards dealing with waste. They should, if necessary, collaborate with other governments to foster research and bring about optimization of production process by reducing the amount of wastes produced as by-products.
In conclusion, it is widely evident now that a lot of rubbish is being produced than ever before. There are various reasons from corporates to citizens as to how the rubbish is being produced and wrongly dealt with. Governments must, at least now, ensure successful implementation of necessary programmes instead of fake promises to curb down the production of too much rubbish. Better late than never.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50980392157 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00843465862 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585434173669 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3487613881 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.35 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.85 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124430011683 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412699169365 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442227202499 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838845223666 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396783791121 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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