Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear John ,
This is with regards to the complaint letter about the noise emanating from my house.
Foremost, As you are aware that my house is deteriorating and needs renovation ,
I am in a process of reconstructing the utility area. Furthermore, replacing the rotten roof that is causing multiple water leaks . The noise is due to wood cutting and continuous hammering for nailing the roof structure .
I understand the emanating noise this is very much disturbing not only to you but also
other neighbours in the colony. However I’d like to apologize for the inconveniences
and the troublesome caused, And thank you for bringing this to my notice.
In the best interest of all , I have advised my workers to expedite the works and to work
During day time where all students are in their schools and adults will be there
at work and finish the work by 5.00pm when all are back. And promise that
you hear no such noise anymore.
Sorry again ,
Yours faith fully
Mac
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear John , This is with regards to the complain...
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...are aware that my house is deteriorating and needs renovation , I am in a proces...
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...e is deteriorating and needs renovation , I am in a process of reconstructing th...
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...oof that is causing multiple water leaks . The noise is due to wood cutting and co...
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...hammering for nailing the roof structure . I understand the emanating noise thi...
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...much disturbing not only to you but also other neighbours in the colony. However ...
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... also other neighbours in the colony. However I'd like to apologize for the inco...
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...like to apologize for the inconveniences and the troublesome caused, And thank yo...
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...y notice. In the best interest of all , I have advised my workers to expedite t...
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...orkers to expedite the works and to work During day time where all students are i...
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...n their schools and adults will be there at work and finish the work by 5.00pm wh...
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...00pm when all are back. And promise that you hear no such noise anymore. Sorry...
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...ar no such noise anymore. Sorry again , Yours faith fully Mac
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... no such noise anymore. Sorry again , Yours faith fully Mac
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.... Sorry again , Yours faith fully Mac
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68139018966 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3467575698 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201574257909 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752474954848 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422836874406 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614710692875 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372349555305 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.