These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In present mobile phones and internet are the need of every Single person but their are many advantage or disadvantage of these things in these days.
In begin with the help of mobile phones and internet, people can talk to each in any time and anywhere. For example they call to their relatives any time does not matter how far they long live from each other. With the help of internet people doing their work at home.
After that there are so many advantage and disadvantage of mobile phones and internet with the help of mobile phones and internet people can do their work or communicate at home and anwhere. Students can do their school work with the help of internet. House wife can pay their bill and do Shopping at home with the help of Internet.
Their are so many disadvantages of mobile phones and Internet like the people are So busy in mobile Phone it can cause of accident For example people use their mobile phones while driving it is major cause of accident at road. Human used internet all day and all night. This things are affected on human eye and brain thats by Person 60% person are used spect. On other had children use internet or mobile phone and they do not do their school work.
The rays of mobile phones and Internet which are recieved by these are very harmfull for birds or humans, because these are pass though their bodyies and causes of many deceases. To increase the speed of internet nasa use satelite and these satalite are perduced pollution in Atmosphere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: There
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61940298507 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19058771515 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44776119403 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7237069308 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2307692308 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31209346518 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131532306125 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841148622172 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203110422345 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444735170917 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.