Some people think that it is a better for children to grow up in the countryside than in the city others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion
For a long time now migration to the cities from the ruler areas in is a consistent phenomenon.there has been a ragging debate amount raising children in a countryside or in an urban environment, as a result of this. I feel that in the present time we should rise our children in the cities.
There are many reason where the urban area of a more benefits. First, cities have a more earning opportunity, better infrastructure and well-developed education and health facilities.second, it is a possible here to raise a children well and give him or her every possible support to enable his or her development into an intelligent and responsible human being. Third, cities are notes of connectivity to other countries of the world.therefore, if one grow up in an urban environment there is a good chance of being exposed to other culture and many academic and professional opportunity may open. As a result, the child also becomes a more tolerant and accepting.
however, cities are now very polluted and crowded while countryside of a relative peaceful and your atmosphere.so child shall not to be exposed to the harmful aspect of urban environment year and can grow up in a setting.in addison's, since the beginning of the school days, and urban child lives a life of competition. This, at times, makes the children more self-centered and inconsiderate towers others.
To conclude, I opine that even though the villages are more peaceful and pollution free we should bring our children only in the seat is if we wish to give them a good opportunity to have a fulfilling life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...ur children in the cities. There are many reason where the urban area of a more benefits...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
....second, it is a possible here to raise a children well and give him or her every possible...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...comes a more tolerant and accepting. however, cities are now very polluted and crowd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90298507463 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19199788902 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.0430730382 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172801395628 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587494095012 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425165211152 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952784931743 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285137960061 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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