Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, picture, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
creativity means to create art which helps the person to express ones ideas freely that what they thinks about something but government sometimes imposes some restrictions on them. This effects the artists adversely but I agree these to some extent.
To start with, people has different natures and thinking. In individual capacity, people convey their ideas in different ways. For examples in films, producers, directors or even writers can make a film which is not suitable for particular type of audiences likewise children, they might come up with films consisting explicated contents, sort of sexual explication which may not be suitable to watch the movies sitting in families. that's the reason government has a regularity body censor board which sees to films are suitable for audience. As these plays a very pivotal role in life's of the public which gets influenced easily. so government regulating the things are essential.
Authorities sometimes due to their own personal benefit or under some other person influences they distur the creativity of the artists so that can benefit the third party that is purely wrong. these corrupt people disturbs the freedom of the other person.
In the end it could said the creativity of an artist is essential as it can help to build a well groomed society but essential is government imposing restrictions on theses must be on ethical basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, may, so, third, well, for example, sort of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16740088106 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66567513118 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63436123348 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5051453807 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200933075174 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658637915631 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438339430994 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118500521656 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396097931792 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.