The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possibile causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.
During the last decade, the proportion of obese children in western culture has been raised by almost 20%. There are many reasons which has result in many issues.
To start with, it can be said that a healthy mind resides in healthy body. Nowadays, people, especially children, are getting obese. There can be plethora of factors which affects the children's health like junk food, lack of exercise, binge eating and many more, but the two main causes of this issue are; junk food and lack of outdoor activities. Firstly junk food are ready made food items which a person can consume directly. Food items like street food and food served in some restaurants are considered as junk food. They serves the packed food which sometimes has preservatives that are precarious for the both human health and human body. Secondly, the outdoor activities which are required by the children to be conducted are often ignored. Moreover, children are always seems to be playing games on mobile phones which are not only reduces their eyesight at early age, but also makes their body weak. Some physiologists says that due to lack of exercises, few children tends to develop obesity
Consequently, it leads to many diseases such as high cholesterol, high blood pressure, postural deformities, etc. most of the children are likely to develop inferiority complex at early age as they can once be a victim of body shaming. But there is no smoke without fire, likewise, there are solutions to this issue. Measures are always opposite to the causes, initially by avoiding junk food, is seen as the first step to be taken. As children start avoiding this, they are less likely to develop obesity. Secondly, with the encouragement of doing exercises, children are influenced to do the exercises on regular basis, for instance, yoga is the oldest way of dealing with obesity. It helps the children's bodies to grow to the fullest.
In a nutshell, it can be said that no doubt, children are falling prey to obesity, but some can be adopted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'serve'
Suggestion: serve
...rants are considered as junk food. They serves the packed food which sometimes has pre...
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Line 3, column 930, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'say'.
Suggestion: say
...kes their body weak. Some physiologists says that due to lack of exercises, few chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53127896701 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1507727205 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944157686071 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360332560314 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454742573125 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720812893299 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440707586748 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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