The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates an amount of fish and several meat consumed in a European country from 1979 to 2004
In 1979 , beef had the highest consumption at 225 grams as opposed to
fish , the lowest , which accounted for about 60 grams. chicken was as popular as lamb.
Approximately 150 grams of them were consumed.
By 1989 , there were some fluctuations in chicken and beef which made
the amount of consumption similar at 190 grams. but , chicken was likely to be more favorable than beef.
Despite some fluctuations in the consumption of lamb , it gradually decreased over period. People chose to eat lamb
around 100 grams compared to fish which slightly decreased to about 50 grams.
In 2004, chicken was in the first choice for eating. about 250 grams of it were consumed while beef
dramatically dropped to almost 100 grams. In terms of lamb consumption , it continually fell and ending at
around 60 grams whereas fish consumption fluctuated but likely to remained constant
Overall , beef , which used to be favorite , has a significant drop in comsumption while chicken become more preferable
and has a dramatic rise. In addition , the popularity of other foods decreased over the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun meat seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some meat'.
Suggestion: some meat
...graph illustrates an amount of fish and several meat consumed in a European country from 197...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a European country from 1979 to 2004 In 1979 , beef had the highest consumpti...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ountry from 1979 to 2004 In 1979 , beef had the highest consumption at 225...
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Suggestion: Fish
...nsumption at 225 grams as opposed to fish , the lowest , which accounted for abou...
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Suggestion: ,
...ption at 225 grams as opposed to fish , the lowest , which accounted for about ...
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Suggestion: ,
...grams as opposed to fish , the lowest , which accounted for about 60 grams. chi...
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Suggestion: Chicken
...t , which accounted for about 60 grams. chicken was as popular as lamb. Approximatel...
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Suggestion:
...ely 150 grams of them were consumed. By 1989 , there were some fluctuations i...
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Suggestion: ,
...s of them were consumed. By 1989 , there were some fluctuations in chicken...
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Suggestion: The
...tions in chicken and beef which made the amount of consumption similar at 190 gr...
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Suggestion: But
...nt of consumption similar at 190 grams. but , chicken was likely to be more favorab...
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Suggestion: ,
...of consumption similar at 190 grams. but , chicken was likely to be more favorable...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... fluctuations in the consumption of lamb , it gradually decreased over period. Peo...
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Suggestion: Around
...ver period. People chose to eat lamb around 100 grams compared to fish which slight...
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...lightly decreased to about 50 grams. In 2004, chicken was in the first choice...
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...ken was in the first choice for eating. about 250 grams of it were consumed while bee...
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Suggestion: Dramatically
...grams of it were consumed while beef dramatically dropped to almost 100 grams. In terms o...
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Suggestion: ,
... 100 grams. In terms of lamb consumption , it continually fell and ending at ar...
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Suggestion:
...around 60 grams whereas fish consumption fluctuated but likely to remained consta...
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Suggestion:
...ated but likely to remained constant Overall , beef , which used to be favori...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ely to remained constant Overall , beef , which used to be favorite , has ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...remained constant Overall , beef , which used to be favorite , has a signi...
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Suggestion: ,
...erall , beef , which used to be favorite , has a significant drop in comsumption w...
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Suggestion: And
...while chicken become more preferable and has a dramatic rise. In addition , the ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and has a dramatic rise. In addition , the popularity of other foods decreased...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78272345503 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550505050505 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 83.7955007767 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 1.69756097561 1473% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122384600765 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427507928649 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602239866521 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485189438415 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601623297731 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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