The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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The table shows the number of speakers of six languages in three categories as well as native speakers, additional language and the total number of speakers.
Overall, it is noticeable that the total number of speakers in Mandarin Chinese is strikingly higher than the other languages with 1,090 million speakers.
Over 1,000 million speakers in the world speak Mandarin Chinese language. Meanwhile, the number of native speakers speak this language with 900 million. Besides, people speak at least about 339 million which is very lower than the number of speakers in the world which is at around 942 million, it put the second position following to the total number of speakers learn Mandarin Chinese language.
The number of second language learners is at around 603 million who speak English. Additional, Portuguese is spoken by 10 million speakers. Moreover, the number of people speak the Portuguese language in the table which is very lower than in other languages.
- The government should control the amount of violence in films and television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue? 61
- Many people say that family is the most powerful influence on a child’s development. However, some people suppose that other factors (such as music, friends,…) have a great influence on children.” Discuss both views and give your opinions. 67
- In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. 56
- AN increasing number of people are buying what the need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online? 61
- The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, second, well, while, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24840764331 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53931718579 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458598726115 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.2782924853 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107581295735 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615583291893 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356574400316 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848975445122 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261680598671 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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