workers should do one task on all work day rather than different task.agree or disagree
Workers are the essential for any company. They play the vital role in company. Although, plethora of people believes that workers should be given the different tasks than same tasks, I believe that workers feel pleasant if they do one task during the workday. I feel like this because of following reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, if workers have only one task, their work improved day by day. By doing great work they could get rewards from their owner. For example, in newspaper house some journalist is master in writing criminal crisis while some are expert in political news. If they always working on get same kind of news every day, they would be famous in their filed. This prosperity will be great achievement in their life.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is they would be more likely to study deeply in those particular subjects. Eventually, increase the company's profit. For example, in laminate tube printing factory, if one person take the responsibility to make design of product, then he will try to figure out all the designs whichever attractive for consumers. Moreover, this will be great for company's profit. Eventually, employ can get more salary from owner.
However, in some cases it is possible that employs do not like to do one task in all day long. This is because it is boring for them. New task can improve their skills in different fields. nevertheless, it is also true that they are not expert in doing all type of task, so it will be great if they do which is possible for them.
By the way of the conclusion, based on the all concerned explored above, I believe that by giving similar tasks all day to worker can enhance their ability as well as increase in the factory's profit and their salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, well, while, for example, i feel, kind of, as well as, by the way, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77635782748 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41254043192 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5303514377 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2880144601 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6842105263 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310402805951 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943547095161 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124514170065 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188156575243 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909958424584 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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