Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Automobiles are considered to be a necessary evil, while they have made humans life easier and faster, they have also made more complicated due to emission of toxic gases. Therefore, many a person subscribes to the idea that vehicles are the cardinal source of atmosphere pollution, while other advocates industries as main culprit. This essay will delve in both the views and try to reach a personal conclusion after analysing manifold factors.
On the one hand, automobile generated waste are exponentially increasing than the bygone days due to population explosion. To elaborate, most of the urban centres are densely populated and their transportation demands are high, therefore the production and usage are high in order meet the demands which in turn aggravates the rate of pollution. For instance, research statistics shows that urban population are suffering more from lung related diseases than the rural inhabitants. In addition, despite being the introduction of eco-friendly engine system by various manufacturers, the abundant presence of older vehicles in the road contribute a considerable of environment pollution.
On the other hand, factories contributes to a greater extent in pollution, even though they are concentrated more on peripheries of the city. However, the content and concentration of toxic waste from such sites are comparatively greater than that of automobile exhaustion, which eventually may attribute severe health concerns. For example, various studies confirm incidence and relevance more cancerous diseases are associated in areas with specific industry. Moreover, solid and liquid and liquid wastages are extremely higher from industries and it is almost nil from the automobiles.
In short, although it is difficult to compare the rate of pollution from automobile and industrial sources, technological advancements and stringent policies by the government enables to control the emission from vehicles. However, in my opinion, it is very difficult to arrive a conclusion without a scientific evaluation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66558441558 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1359854979 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6433806976 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.230769231 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110907894837 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375126297866 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401626441352 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617810211687 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252641693643 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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