Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Developed nations should allow people that are devastated by wars and famines to enter their territory and look after them by providing them with shelters and food. This essay totally agrees with this statement because rich countries have a surplus of resources that can be shared and it is also a humanitarian action to do so.
The primary reason why the rich world should accept people leaving their nations due to wars and natural calamities is that it does not really affect western nations to host these inflicted people. Rich countries have strong economies and have several sources of incomes that can suffice the local needs and may even allow others to share their prosperity and welfare. For instance, Germany was one of the main countries that hosted more refugees due to its prosperous economy and the aging population that has always been a serious issue to government legislators.
In addition to that, it is highly moral and humanitarian to welcome refugees that have fewer chances to survive in their motherland. It is unethical for wealthy countries to reject this category of people because every person has a right to survive in peace and security. If refugees remain in their motherland, they are more likely to be killed due to political and army conflicts. For instance, more than 200 innocent children were bombed in a week in Iraq in 2005 which was a great shame to many nations and this has prompted many nations to accept thousands of asylum requests in the UK and Sweden.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that developed nations have moral obligations to accept displaced people and also have a stronger economy that can withstand foreign newcomers.
- Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level.Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to local practices and customs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views 78
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 78
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, really, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00355871886 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55919149858 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.4039806394 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.6 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163263424318 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639544186144 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425362882422 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975779046446 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621085877022 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.