The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
Going against the rule of law and being intimidated into criminal activities is on the surge among the youth in many countries. It is being argued that honing parenting skills can mitigate the effect of youngsters participating in crime. This essay strongly agrees that parents upbringing of their children has an important role to play and with correct training the situation can be controlled.
Firstly, guiding parents on spectrum of criminal activities and specially those offences having highest involvement of young souls will bring clarity on the reasons why such heinous acts are committed. Crime may range from drunken driven to drugs and sexual assault. Understanding the psychology what drives it can be an eye-opener for many of the guardians. Issues like stress, competition, societal pressure, hormonal changes can lead young minds to commit unlawful activities. So, a skilled mother or father will be better equipped to identify what is influencing a youngster to jump into crime. Is it a peer group or an external influence?
Secondly, if parents will be well versed with techniques to cater to their child’s mischievous habits at nascent stage, it will be easier for them to mold their behavior. Skills like being their best friend can go a long way in securing any emotional breakdown in their life. For instance, learning of slang language, how one communicate on different platforms, can be a great differentiator. However, caution should be maintained not to micro-manage their lives and to give independence to their thoughts and beliefs.
To conclude, parents learning life skills to prevent their kin indulgence in criminal activities is a must for any country to maintain peace and harmony. They would be aware and better prepared to take actions, before any situation turns critical.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the highest'.
Suggestion: having the highest
...activities and specially those offences having highest involvement of young souls will bring c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89477778191 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1547357715 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121379343082 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424375675051 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357089452672 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802151081861 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034374254548 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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