Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
We are here in the modern 21st century and there is no doubt that computers as well as technology applications are playing avital role in not only human's intellect development but also the growth of a nation though some its disadvantages. Due to various benefits that computers have brought about, I totally believe that computers are worth being the most important invention of this century.
On the one hand, computers have contributed alot in expand human's knowledge. Thanks to high-tech devices, people can access to an alomost unlimited source of knowledge and information in everything more effectively. For instance, we can do word, excel or even powerpoint for preparing presentation in a computer instead of wasting a huge amount of time to write as well as calculate by hand in the past even with a higher risk. As a result, a nation with a well-educated public can minimize the crime rate and balance society.
On the other hand, computers are also the double edge sword that have an intimate connection with moral lapses. A wealth of information but lack of teachers' and family's guidance can address to misunderstanding as well as social evil. Information are uncontrolled. There are a variety of realistic examples such as dark web with violence and corrupt information that are unsuitable and strictly forbidden for children.
In conclusion, computers can lead everyone to the social evil way by a lack of guidance however when knowledge and convienience that computers contributing in human growth are taken into consideration, it totally worth being the most essential creation in the last century undeniably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ons are playing avital role in not only humans intellect development but also the grow...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ing as well as social evil. Information are uncontrolled. There are a variety of re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04712894947 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4754807605 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160057519315 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553989246472 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649504143701 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981580670835 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415041801489 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.