Nowadays men’s sports are given far more attention by society compared to women’s sports. What are the reasons for that? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Sports are widely seen in all areas of the world. However, most of the audience’s attention is devoted to men’s sports and relatively small is given to women’s sports. This is attributed to gender bias nature of society and better marketing of former. This is negative development since it makes society unequal and set a bad example for unprivileged women.
Women’s sports are often neglected because most of the societies are male-dominated who love to watch only men’s sports, due to this, they want to see women only as cheerleaders, commentators and wives of sports persons. However, they are not welcomed to play sports due to inherent bias for viewing males as sportspersons. Moreover, there are strong marketing campaigns run for men’s sports and the budget for female sport is relatively negligible. To take an example of the Indian Premier League which is cricket match series for male players, received a marketing budget of more than 100 million in 2019. Women’s cricket team that won the World Cup for India, on the other hand , went unnoticed as no marketing campaign was run to celebrate its achievement.
In my view, the phenomenon gradually increases the gender gap in the society that makes women subordinate to men. They are expected to work for men and not compete with them. Moreover, the unequal nature of society is harmful to the economical development of a nation. Women sports are a source of motivation to other women who perform non-sports activities. When a women’s team game recognition, all women feel that they can achieve more. This improve the economic output of a country and makes it more prosperous.
In conclusion, women sports should be given equal importance that men’s sports get. This is important to reduce gender gap. This will make society socially stable and economically prosperous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, as for, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21523178808 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96089822115 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5925656761 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410531894895 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1294426142 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875057543033 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282697643975 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658538884074 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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