In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done for this problem?
It is undeniable fact that agriculture contributes majorly for the economic growth of any developing country. Government takes extra efforts to help agriculture by providing them advanced equipment.Still major part of these economies lack basic necessity like food for many. This is due to gap between farmer and intermediary for prices and water problems in many regions. This issues have solutions like educating farmers about real prices of crops and providing water irrigation properly across all states of the country.
Though farmers are equipped with the best of irrigation machines, still they are dependent for selling their crops to the middleman or directly to whole seller. Hence due to lack of awareness, farmers gets cheated. Apart from this, water is one of the major problem why crops fail leading to hunger. It is known to all that water is not equally available in all the states of developing countries. Farmers become helpless if enough water is not supplied for harvesting.
With the problems, comes analysis of trying to solve the issues. Here, government can try to educate the peasants about the various kind of prices available in market for their crops. Being educated supports them to actively raise their demands for grains or vegetables grown. Similarly enough water supply during harvesting of land should be provided so that farmers can successfully plant the seeds and water them as required. This both solutions would be sufficient to help farmers to grow crops and get better money for the same.
Concluding, providing advanced equipments are not enough to fight hunger hence government should try to look for educating the farmers and solving water problems which in turn could help farmers earn better and regular water supply can motivate them to have basis necessity like food, regularly.This would ultimately reduce hunger and people would have chances to excel more in other fields of life.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23794212219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60573191536 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556270096463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1816271557 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164649792075 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606592239872 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500011315612 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106751005665 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229044111781 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.