You recently bought a piece of equipment for your home but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter:
describe the problem with the equipment
explain what happened when you phoned the shop
say what you would like the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I bought new Television from your shop which is not functioning properly.
After installation of TV at my home it worked fine, however ten days later the audio quality has became low. I have tried few steps such as resetting and increasing volume through remote finally these were did not fixed the problem.
I have given a phone call to your store and a service team has answered it then I have explained the problem later they said a technician will visit my home to address the issue. However, technician did not visited my house.
I request you to replace my TV with brand new product as it has the warranty of one year. In addition, I suggest you to please check the tv before delivering to my home. It may avoid issues with new product, so that I can enjoy with my new TV.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Your sincerely,
Chakravarthy Lekkala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...er ten days later the audio quality has became low. I have tried few steps such as res...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...olume through remote finally these were did not fixed the problem. I have given...
^^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'fix'
Suggestion: fix
...rough remote finally these were did not fixed the problem. I have given a phone c...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'visit'
Suggestion: visit
... the issue. However, technician did not visited my house. I request you to replace ...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you, Your sincerely, Chakravarthy Lekkala
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, look, may, so, then, in addition, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44937673027 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3901350497 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237206802659 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906628523809 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620098172408 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124289595643 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697047102891 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.