Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss
In recent years, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see people indulging in spending increasing number of hours at work, be it an affluent or impoverished nation. While some people believe that overtime at work can impact their personal life negatively, others think that spending extra time at work is more beneficial. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate its both sides in detail with reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons why working more than 8 to 9 hours can have adverse on personal life, but the most conspicuous one is that overtime at work can not only contribute to stress but also lead to numerous other disadvantages in various fields. For example, according to a recent survey undertaken by a group of experts at Columbia University has asserted that not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective by maintaining work-life balance, but they can enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of spending only required number of time at work and not indulging in overtime is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication, and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of keeping a balance in both personal and professional life by allocating time wisely and equally on both.
To recapitulate, one can conclude that the effects of the work-life balance are indeed too high to ignore and when implemented correctly and swifting can lead to glorious future for human race.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 323.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03095975232 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81796679257 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575851393189 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.599460792 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.727272727 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308650645813 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107543522997 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895563976144 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177339011093 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497314127086 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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