Nowadays people are increasingly dependent on their smart phones. Is this positive trend? What are advantages or disadvantages of this dependency? Support your point of view with reason and examples from your own experience or observations.
In this generation people are most of them using smart phone to update their knowledge and communication and also using it for some other purpose, peoples are general usage of phone is increased.
The smart phone is developed in 20th century, nowadays people are using higher rate of percentage, but on another hand the kids & young generation using smart phone more than elders, it have positive and negative impact to the people, the smart phone have more information people always says that world in our hand, it’s true fact but another side it have more negative.
In case if the children’s when using smart phone, they can also take in to wrong direction so that parents and teachers need to focus the children to direct them in right path.
Smart phone also is used in some working field such as news broadcasting in on time wherever in this earth, people can have gathered news, entertainment etc.
The people dependency is augmented in social net working field by the by the demand of the smart phone also raised, so may new production and networking company have established and also job requirement increased for young generation.
Conclusion, smart phone has so many positive trends but same as negative impact, by using in right direction it helps to gain more knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96330275229 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62073407988 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8340471059 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.333333333 104.977214359 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.9669160288 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129892340057 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735729718349 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284700189953 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735729718349 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284700189953 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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