9. Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
9. Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whilst some people believe that being a teenager brings a great deal of happiness rather than being a responsible mature, others are of the belief of the opposite view. This essay will discuss both sides of this debate thoroughly before a reasonable conclusion will be reached.
On the one hand, the teenage years are often seen as the most exciting period of many people’s life simply because of their less responsibilities and more freedom. This is to say that a teenager, unlike adults, usually does not have to care about paying bills, proving himself at work, or competing with other businesses’ owners. Definitely, these qualities do contribute to less stressful life and often lead to a sense of fulfillment and happiness amongst young people. A recent survey conducted by “ Family Care Organization”, on 200 British families, has revealed that 80% of teenagers found to be extremely glad and satisfied about the way they live their lives, while the ratio has dramatically decreased to 25% when it comes to their parents.
On the other hand, many, including myself, may think that being a grown-up is far more rewarding because a person gets paid and even the sense of accountability either at home or work, for many, is a positive and enjoyable in itself. In addition to this, many individuals do passionately enjoy looking after their loved ones, and they never consider this as a disadvantageous. For example, while I was a child, I frequently asked my parents to travel to Europe during summer holidays, but they refuted due to either lack of monetary resources or their irrational strict parental control. Nevertheless, after I had graduated, I got a well-paid job, and since then I have been visiting numerous countries during my annual leave.
Having presented the aforementioned ideas, it can be concluded that although the many merits for the teenage years such as the absence of work or family-related constraints, being self-independent mature can bring more happiness by independently making one’s financial and social decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun responsibilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ratio has dramatically decreased to 25% when it comes to their parents. On th...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...d ones, and they never consider this as a disadvantageous. For example, while I was a child, I fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24193548387 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07852861293 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5669460693 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.285714286 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373893629713 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147667141929 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180330449019 0.0667982634062 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258230322831 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263025553697 0.056905535591 462% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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