Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
Recently, the design of buildings having an impact on people's life has triggered a controversy in the world. Some people argue that proper architecture will have positive effects on the human brain whereas, others reject this notion saying design does not impact the people lifestyle. This essay will discuss the impact of building design on people's work and life.
Firstly, there are myriad reasons that stem the fact that the good design of an office has a positive impact on the office workers but the most important one is the way employees feel refreshed and happy to work in a floor where abundant light and air is present. There are very good interior designs to make the office look more elegant and encouraging by filling with small plants and make them greener. For example, a recent survey on employee satisfaction has revealed that an increase in productivity is the result of the best interior plan of their office. This makes a clear case of why a good design has an encouraging influence on workers.
Secondly, poor planning of houses will make the people lost and stressed as they do not have fresh air and mindset to think creatively. People generally fail to plan their homes properly result in an increase in mental health problems. For instance, a recent study on people's lifestyle who stay in congested homes has shown that they are more prone to diseases related to stress. This is apparent why houses need to be designed properly to avoid mental illness.
In conclusion, this essay has discussed how positive designs improve productivity and negative designs lead to health problems. In my opinion, irrespective of office or home, one has to select a well-designed place to stay or work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...oblems. For instance, a recent study on peoples lifestyle who stay in congested homes h...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95172413793 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56667567469 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9688014981 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362251605881 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139011108476 0.0925447433944 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137875981506 0.071462118173 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22748893313 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169121034263 0.0609392437508 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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