Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undoubtable that advertising influence us but in a positive way. It is being argued that advertising has made us all look same which I do not agree with at all. I think we all are born with different personalities. No one's face matches with other, not even the eye color. How an advertising could push us to do the same or look-alike.
If there is no advertising, then we could think that we may look same or do the same. As we would be unaware of new fashion and trend around the world. Just take an example of house wives, advertising educate them about latest trend so that they could follow it thus, making us all look different by choosing different options. In the absence of advertisements this would not have been possible.
I completely disagree with the statement that advertising prevents us from being unique individual. Every person has his own style of living, getting ready. Whereas I believe that advertising gives us chance to look different, if there is no advertising, people would have afraid of trying new look and style. so, the credit goes to advertising which gives us courage to be different from others.
There are tremendous examples which prove that advertising encourage us to do something unique like color our hair purple , get an eye lenses of color blue and so on. I completely disagree with the statement that advertising repels our uniqueness or forces us to be same as others.
In conclusion, advertising is boon for the society, it not only offer us knowledge but also boost us to try something new or excite our unique personality.
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| 2019-11-07 | Muhammad Omar | 84 | view |
| 2019-05-17 | harmankaur | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, thus, whereas, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77818181818 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80167831599 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1215804049 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390839198356 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135733376589 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105454571624 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216012596924 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923003865288 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.