Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is widely accepted that, climate change nowadays becoming a serious problem for all over the world. It is often argued that joining hands from all over the nations is the positive sign to control the worse climate condition whilst, others disagree and think that separate focus from country is enough to control the impact of ongoing climate change. This essay agrees that worldwide concentration in regards to maintain sustainable climate condition create more sense of unity and among the nation. The essay will discuss both point of view.
It is clear that, a serious dialogue and research from all over the world have focused on the uniformity procedure in regards to eradicate the negative impact of worse climate conditions. Moreover, significant numbers of countries are gathered frequently and paid attention regarding finding the best ways to minimize the effect of climate change on living species and strengthening mutual understanding on the common issues. It is therefore agreed that, friendly environment is most important phenomenon for survival. For example, a recent study of 2018 conducted by “Ministry of Environment Nepal” shows that, 10% of the national budget have spent annually on global purpose of making sustainable climate change.
However, many disagree and feel that physical distance of the countries for common world issue may distract countries from constructive work and further believe that contributing from the country specific is equally important. On the other words, they may get less time to meet frequently in one platform and put forward their ideas related to ongoing initiation to minimize the impact of global climate change. Despite this, paying attention globally is still possible through the internet and magazine and this essay disagrees the physical distance for this reason. For instance, this is most evident in my country that, a lot of youth and concern stakeholders are paying attention to the global environmental issue through different web interactions and publications.
In conclusion, while unified action from the world around can make the significant contribution to balance the degredeous world environment, some people still feel that for the world issue specific contribution from individual country is more enough. However, I personally think that collaborative actions allow more strength to the countries to deal with such an important issue of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...say agrees that worldwide concentration in regards to maintain sustainable climate condition ...
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Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ave focused on the uniformity procedure in regards to eradicate the negative impact of worse ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4801061008 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82636916991 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533156498674 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.63057254 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.571428571 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873473384797 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333283839921 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304665472912 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552913763369 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030514610463 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.