the diagram shows the process of how to make smoked fish. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flow chart illustrates the process of smoking fish in different stages.
It can be seen that this process has eight stages, beginning with the preparation of the fish and ending with the delivery of the finished products.
First, fish are cleaned by hand by a knife and then soak in salt water for half an hour. After that, the fish in the salty liquid is cooked in five minutes before being removed to drain off all the water.
The process of smoking is now ready to start. To begin with, fish are put in the top a vat which contains burning chore coal in the bottom. this vat is covered by a plank of wood so that smoke cannot escape. The next stage is coloring the fish with yellow color. next, yellow colored fish are packaged into boxes. Finally, these boxes of smoked fish are loading onto trucks which deliver them to where they will be sold.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...tains burning chore coal in the bottom. this vat is covered by a plank of wood so th...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...is coloring the fish with yellow color. next, yellow colored fish are packaged into ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45283018868 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01850542407 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8352071503 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146906876315 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630192094123 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036117264506 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898078418162 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398227728489 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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