In today’s world, different government and international organizations are confronting many global problems. What is the most pressing problem among them and it’s impact on its inhabitants and planet give solutions?
In this contemporary era, the human society is forging ahead at an amazing rate in various realms. Yet, at the same time, many problems have arisen, the most pressing problem that environment pollution has triggered intense influence throughout world. In this essay, we will discussed this grave issue and give some suggestions.
Undeniably, there is a widely believed perception that environment pollution, especially air pollution, is one of the main causes of climate change. More specifically, a large amount of gas emission from factories and vehicles leads to global warming which results in a rising sea level, threatening human habitats. Furthermore, another factor is overpopulation. Growth in the high living standard enhanced people's life expectancy, which generates growing demands for food and resource. Thus, more waste and pollutants are produced, which are harmful to the soils, plants, rivers and oceans.
To release this alarming issue, it is important to take some measures to mitigate it. For government, improving public transport network to encouraging people using public transportation is an effective way to reducing car use. To commercial organizations, developing green energy products and renewable energy source for energy efficiency is the ultimate method for cutting dioxide emission. To individuals, learning how to recycle disposable goods and household appliances to reducing waste is an eco-friendly way what we are able to do.
To summarize, from what has been discussed, we can see that only through joint effort and cooperation among governments, commercial organizations and individuals, the press problem could take a turn for the better.
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...friendly way what we are able to do. To summarize, from what has been discuss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69291338583 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07583889721 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685039370079 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3083071414 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 7.25397266985 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994149754597 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287489715192 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470011338901 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626281572121 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046018910494 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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