privacy
In this modern era, entertainment and spots always have been in center of eye on Tv and internet. It is really easy to follow the celebrities and get gossip news as hot topic. But it is not that convenient for them to be the favorite topic of everyone. They also have to work hard at each step to destination whether they are working on film or for game. I would be totally agree that entertainer and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now with following reasons.
To began with, whenever celebrities step out from door they have to take care of dressing styles and accessories. As like what car are they using? which type of cloths they have on? which place are they going to visit? They are always under observation by social media and news channels. No one can imagine how it would feel if someone is keeping eye on for twenty four hours. Certainly, it will cause discomfort when individual is being watched all the time. Also, it will restrict some action which might be seen in case of freedom. For instance, Amitabachan, the old and famous actor, who have always fan outside his door, so he has mentioned about privacy and distance he needed from his fan zone.
Sometimes, these people really do not want to share every single details about their life. To whom are they dating? with whom they have current relationship? Who is expecting or pregnant? Obviously, these small details can get leak easily which make uncomfortable and conflicts between their relationships. For example, two popular persons Virat Kohali and Anushka Sharma were dating each other, while answering to social media they got conflicts and almost broke up for two years. So, it could not have happened if they did not have to face that thing in early period of their relationship.
Moreover, Entertainer and athletes always wants to be popular in early phase, but it cost a lot sometimes, with other expense like security and other privacy equipment. it is not considerable to go outside without any protection, because their past actions might have scared or hurt people, where the people decided to take a revenge and they can attack on celebrities any time without fear. they can shoot or hurt them and celebrities will never feel same around.
In the end, it it easy to gain popularity and became famous within audience but they also have to pay the price of their freedom. They can get love from people but they also ave to accept the grudge from public and for that reason it is crucial to have more privacy than they have now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ories. As like what car are they using? which type of cloths they have on? which plac...
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ing? which type of cloths they have on? which place are they going to visit? They are...
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
...d feel if someone is keeping eye on for twenty four hours. Certainly, it will cause discomf...
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Line 2, column 604, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'fanned'.
Suggestion: fanned
...e old and famous actor, who have always fan outside his door, so he has mentioned a...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...ut their life. To whom are they dating? with whom they have current relationship? Wh...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e security and other privacy equipment. it is not considerable to go outside witho...
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Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...k on celebrities any time without fear. they can shoot or hurt them and celebrities ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...ll never feel same around. In the end, it it easy to gain popularity and became famo...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69887640449 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43709496941 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548314606742 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2379103182 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4230769231 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1153846154 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65384615385 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846606315836 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0220167468196 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520576775519 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619167959502 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328907741224 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.