Every year several languages die out .Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
The expression of ideas is different ranging from states to countries,and this gives birth to numerous languages. However,many languages are vanishing
annually and some people believe that saving the mother tongue from extinction is not essential as less languages will make life uncomplicated and comfortable. I strongly condemn the statement and believe that native language should be retained as it defines the culture,identity and uniqueness
of person and nation in this world.
To begin with,language is a medium of communication through which people express their cultural believes and share traditions. The disappearance of
mother tongue can lead to the destruction of heritage and culture. In other words,the language binds the people to their cultural and native backgrounds and additionally it is responsible for the generation of admiration for motherland. To exemplify, there are more than hundred and fifty languages in world's largest democratic country India,which represents the importance of linguistics for customs and values.
Moreover,my view point is further
bolstered by the fact that language is responsible to provide uniqueness and identity to people and country. Primarily, different people and countries are often identified by their mother language and if the language dies out it can certainly lead to destruction of country's identity.
Taking the example of china,country with highest economy adheres to use their country language in every manufacturing product which embarks its name and
integrity throughout the world. Next,losing the linguistics can cost the people or country to loose their capability of representing themselves to the world,
and lagging them behind in the race of development.
Furthermore, with the extinction of language the trade of tourist can extremely suffer. Also,if every country will have similar language than people will often have no reason to travel to other places,which can lead to decrease in tourism. Not only trade but the economy of the country will be affected if languages will keeps on dying in the same rate.
In conclusion,it can be stated that instead of providing easy life the deterioration of languages can lead to loss of
name,tradition and economy. Therefore,
preservation of mother tongue is quintessential in order to safeguard ourselves. In near future,it will become an urgent need for government to take some strict actions to protect the languages from elimination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63636363636 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18533037631 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532085561497 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6877320436 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276465100876 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916307644943 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491392329787 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923195565234 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604287259295 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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