Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
Nowadays, a lot of visitors choose to visit places of extremely harsh conditions, like Sahara desert and Antarctic. However, such trips comes with is pros and cons.
Unusual experience and education, are some of the advantages of visiting uncomfortable places like that . Firstly, deciding to visit such places takes a lot of courage because not everyone could adapt to such an environment and in the process an invaluable experience is achieved. It may even be a life time opportunity and such moment is best experienced personally. Also it will be an inspirational and educative opportunity to visit such a unique area even though it might be a risky adventure. I believe no knowledge is a waste and knowledge is power to those who have it. It is imperative to know how other people live and survive under such unbearable conditions.
However, there is the danger of health risk and wastefulness of resources , venturing into such habitats. Firstly , not many people can adapt or cope with difficult situations. Different people have varied tolerance level. More so, our immunity also varies based on our inherent DNA. Exploring such environments may be a disaster in the case of unexpected ailment due to the harsh weather conditions and a good health care facility may not be easily accessible. Secondly, resources that could have been used for important things are often wasted on frivolous escapades. Time is an invaluable resources that must carefully managed, because , most times, time lost may never e regained.
In conclusions, of recent many individuals are taking more risks exploring hazardous places as their vacation destinations but such exploits has the pros of being informative and definitely with its prevalent demerits of being a life threatening adventure and a waste of valuable time and resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21768707483 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9733513047 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8435172697 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214026570185 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602731307502 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551946210519 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133322743056 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486678810623 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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