You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am interested in obtaining further information about the one-week walking tour that you offer to the Cotopaxi as I have always wanted to climb it to the top since I was a child.
Moreover, the time when it is mostly covered by snow and the ski centre opens is getting closer. However, I am not a person who exercises regularly which makes me doubt about taking the tour. That is why I would Like to be informed about the difficulty level of the hiking and what kind of training would you recommend me to do from now until the day of the tour.
The brochure I have do not specify the costs of the tour. Besides, it does not clarify what is included in the package and which dates can be chosen to start the tour. Therefore, I would
be grateful if you could give me more details about these topics as soon as possible in order
to start planning my trip.
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41317365269 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34281006676 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5797568814 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205987048798 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079140541747 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490253572478 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988393771358 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587026823693 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.