Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples.
These days, multitude if critical issue are being debated in our life and massive upsurge in the study and employment both are continue in the same time is most controversial one. I will explain the key point of my stance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, I can offer variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among these study and work both are very different factor which is very difficult carry equally at the same time. Study need more time to read and completing the given assignment. In my opinion education is most important factor in our life if we are well educated we get good job in any time. We don't wary about job.
Another, pivotal aspect of my point of view are employment is also one of the most important part or ti is the fundamental need to fulfill the basic need. Most of student continue both in the same time due to lack of financial problem they are not money to pay in university so they earn money and pay in college.
Finally, after taking aforementioned point in to consideration from my personal prospective I am inclined to believed that the student who carry both study and work in the same time faced difficulty in their study and he/ she have some economic problem in home or they want to some thing for their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...ge in the study and employment both are continue in the same time is most controversial ...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ducated we get good job in any time. We dont wary about job. Another, pivotal aspec...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...d difficulty in their study and he/ she have some economic problem in home or they w...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...conomic problem in home or they want to some thing for their family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51694915254 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48638926385 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555084745763 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0691568738 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163171137945 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639634675954 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321396300491 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100604878379 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022921325562 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.