Success in todays society is measured in terms of wealth. to what extent do you agree with this
definition of success? What other measures of success should society take into consideration ?
wealth cannot be earned easily in this modern days without possessing smart skills. One has to make up his mind
and tune into the frequency of earning money with all the opportunities that he faces as challenges in this society.
Once any individual becomes rich, he is often pointed out as a successful person, since he had overcomes all the
challenges and living his desireful life.
For the past few decades, Sucessfull person are measured with the wealth he have. A wealthy people can buy or do
anything as they wishes, unlike unhealthy people who struggle to make their life life more royal and manage family expenses.
Bill Gates and Warren buffet are one among the worlds richest personlaities, who are quiet influential and are recognised as
successfull person in the society. Many would like to follow them and know their path of achievements, so that people could
try to follow the same path and become successful in their life.
People in society should not only consider wealth as a measure of success. There are many, who help needy people and bring
their life to betterment and peace. One such successfull person is Mother Teressa, who served needy people throughout her
life-time. Helping and serving needy people should also be considered as a measure, since it helps to improve everyone in
the society giving them a chance to have better life.
To conclude, wealth, Helping tendency and serving people under poverty line stands equal in weights as a measure of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wealth
wealth cannot be earned easily in this modern ...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l person, since he had overcomes all the challenges and living his desireful life...
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Line 6, column 77, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... person are measured with the wealth he have. A wealthy people can buy or do anythi...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'wish'
Suggestion: wish
... people can buy or do anything as they wishes, unlike unhealthy people who struggle t...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: life
...althy people who struggle to make their life life more royal and manage family expenses. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th of achievements, so that people could try to follow the same path and become s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., who served needy people throughout her life-time. Helping and serving needy peo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, since it helps to improve everyone in the society giving them a chance to hav...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve everyone in the society giving them a chance to have better life. To conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03187250996 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53870844228 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2360098321 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.53405017921 309% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163878262242 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763047549273 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103565296777 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610410354195 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712089168867 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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