Individuals today have more information about health than at any time in past. Yet, people are increasingly suffering from fitness- and- diet- related diseases.
Why this happening? What can be done to prevent it?
In today generation people using many technologies like mobile phone which used to make aware about health conscious but even though following the health schedule is tough for people because their focusing more in other activities and eating in fast food, cuisine etc. But in past centuries outside food was prohibited and they work harder than today people.
It is happening due to unhygienic food, improper fitness and diet maintenance. Although the exercise and harder work make them fit and control such diseases like obesity, cardiovascular diseases etc.
The recent journal release in India 70% people having higher value in BMI ratio which cause heart dieses and other dieses also. In spit of citizen of India are spending more money for medical treatment.
There is a famous quote “Health is Wealth” it means the health life is not equal to any other things. My view is focusing health it reduces your stress, led to be happy.
In conclusion, working activity to be change and back to past, when travelling short distance use cycling and walking and avoid bike travel it will help to protect good to your health while also protect our environmental pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ich cause heart dieses and other dieses also. In spit of citizen of India are spendi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 194.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10309278351 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54595346618 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690721649485 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6611017599 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.25397266985 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181241124224 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675892561242 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315022139758 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843922747999 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335483746278 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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