In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
These days and time the number of people who became overweight has increased and their physical fitness and health are declining. This essay will first discuss the reasons behind this growing issues and address some viable solutions.
The foremost cause for increasing average bodyweight of people is rising in the consumption of convenience food items. These days more and more people are relying on the junk food items as it contains fat and calories which lead to overweight problem. Also, due to the fact that business competition is increasing day by day people have to work longer hours and they do not have time in doing physical exercise. As a result, serious health problems and obesity are increasing in large number. Incite one example, The Himalayan Times reported that, consumption of junk food leads to detrimental effects in people health and busy life schedule has created lots of problems regarding health.
There are several things that people can do to resolve the problems. One of them is that people should be more selective while choosing their diets and make a habit of having green vegetables, fruits, and juice rather than consuming package food. The other thing is that people should do more physical exercise and burn more calories in their life. A researched carry out by The World Health Organisation found that, doing daily exercise the level of fitness increases and problems related to body weight can be minimized.
To recapitulate, it is true that an unhealthy lifestyle and business competition are major causes for increasing weight issue and to address such problems regular fitness exercise and healthy food habits can be done. Therefore, it is recommended that each and individulas step up to be more concern about their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1275862069 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56692814374 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9652902363 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287352210735 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10614629389 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461229075944 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173715816256 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249059582658 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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