Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
opinions are divided on whether life in a metropolitan city environment is becoming effortless or more arduous. I think that it is getting easier with time..
on the one hand, some have a belief that urban lifestyle is getting more undemanding. with regard to the former, life in a metropolis provides you state of the art facilities such as carpet roads, educational institutions and good healthcare system. These provide people with comfortable living enviroment, as it becomes easy for individuals to travel withing the suburbs, get their desired degrees from a university, and also healthcare entities ensure the free availability of services round the clock for all residents. Thus, it is obvious that life in a city area is easy when above mentioned facilitation is available to population. For Example, a metro bus or train moving through the entire city, ultimately, makes traveling easier.
on the other hand, there are those who believe that non-rural is getting harder gradually. on main reason behind this mindset is traffic congestion. now a days, everyone has their own vehicles, which are used for travel within the surrounding, consequently, leading to traffic jams. hence, people cannot reach for their work on time. another reason to support this notion is that, housing rents are skyrocketing in various apartments and residential buildings across the cities. Therefore, acquiring cheaper accommodation is getting scarce. Finally, job competition has risen at an alarming rate than ever before. So, less employment opportunities are available to highly competent citizens in town businesses.
in conclusion, a variety of thoughts are found on either people's life in a densely populated space is experiencing ease or not. however, i opine that, it definitely, is getting effort-free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41489361702 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02026295719 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677304964539 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5865241543 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8235294118 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184573982699 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507741803242 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513429500036 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108811572258 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522347720535 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.