In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent year, it has been far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measures.
The rise of one-person household can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliance. Young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean ,pay bills and manage his/ her budget, all of which are valuable life skills. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand of housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agent and a whole host of company which reply on houseowner to buy their products and services.
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feeling of loneliness, isolation and worry. The miss out on the emotional support or daily conservation from family members or flatmates can provide, they also need to bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend of living alone is a negative one. Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand of housing is likely to push up property rents and prices. While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those living alone, will be faced with rising living cost.
In conclusion, the increase in one-person household will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21505376344 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79804606922 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6242705897 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221280992836 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755940396425 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641435189663 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124748598446 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743823322917 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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