In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why?
The world has stepped into the 21st century with lots of advancements in technology and in the area of medical researches. There are myriad of inventions such as antibiotics in the field of medicine as well as airplanes and computers takes a pivotal role in the field like tech and travel. this essay will discuss which is the most vital inventions and its major impacts in the society.
At the outset, the world has gained plethora of modern advancements in various fields. The importance of each invention is not negligible as it takes its own role majorly. For instance, the predominant role of computers in this technological era is highly insightful as it takes almost all work of humans done in the past centuries. In addition, the computer system and the softwares help the people to reduce their workload and help them to increase the efficiency of work. So, the impact of computers in the business world and in each area of the society is important.
On the other hand, the importance of antibiotics and airplanes cannot be eliminated as it helps humans in lot many ways. The invention of antibiotics brought a brightnes<a>airplanes</a>s towards medical filed in the prevention and treatment of many disease. In the same way, the distance of travel betwee <a>towards </a>two places reduced with the help of airplanes and helps the people to move from one place to another within a limited time period.
To conclude, all the inventions have its own privilege as it takes its own dominant role in the world. However, in my opinion, computers are the most important inventions, as the people are depending on computers nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96376811594 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02999081854 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518115942029 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 9.0 1.56157635468 576% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0853152645 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145560593723 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518117493054 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390159253758 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890101834175 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198028568147 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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