Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often believed that people are living with wider options and different varieties today. I agree with the idea because of the influence of advertisements and the effect of globalization around the world.
Some people think that we are currently in the era of unlimited choices and I agree. Firstly, advertisements offers a wide range of products from fashionable clothing to popular make-up brands. It provides consumers the information about the items and its pros and cons through customer feedback and recommendations. Secondly, adverts reaches hundreds of people if not millions by different applications online. A skin care line named Klairs, for instance, gained popularity not only in Korea but in worldwide because of its constant appearances in commercials and pop-up ads in social networking sites. Lastly, advertisement involving politicians help the people to decide the suitable person to sit in the government offices by looking to their propagandas, achievements and profile history in public service.
Moreover, people nowadays not only enjoyed the local products but international brands aswell because of globalization. Famous companies abroad are establishing their businesses locally. For example, McDonalds, offers a taste if american food to the people in Asian countries. By doing this, individuals has given food alternatives whenever they want to taste different flavors.Furthermore, the exchanges of products from one country to another brought a huge benefits economically.Prodcuts that are unavailable to the market are now available for the customer to try on.
In conclusion, as the world evolves, our choices became wider through adverts and as the result of globalization.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-28 | Sandhu param | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-26 | Anmolpreet kaur | 11 | view |
| 2020-01-15 | Mimibae 985 | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-10 | ketan | 89 | view |
| 2020-01-04 | Nihad | 56 | view |
- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle the problem? 61
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your 78
- Some people say History is one one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and given your opinion. 78
- With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will became a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...er they want to taste different flavors.Furthermore, the exchanges of products from one cou...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...m one country to another brought a huge benefits economically.Prodcuts that are unavaila...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Prodcuts
...er brought a huge benefits economically.Prodcuts that are unavailable to the market are ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66279069767 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38430693666 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9645352333 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112798890408 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390624522345 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437450001181 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571875377523 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342905272223 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.