Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?
In present, majority of countries make a great effort in order to develop their economy on the case of improving the standards of living, while others believe that social immaterial values lost because of it. Personally, in my opinion, it has more benefits than drawbacks.
On the one hand, considering that economy is the corner stone of development of country, it has several positive aspects. First of all, growth of economy reduce poverty rate of citizens in the country. In that case, living standards of people improve significantly as a result of new creation of new work places and good job prospects and it leads to people make a decent living that effected to welfare of individuals. For instance, people do not suffer from basic needs as a consequence of managing a good income. Furthermore, crime rate is low considerably in economically developed countries comparing the destitute countries. Thus, they are able to invest more budget to education that is one of the key factors of cultivation of government. Undeniable facts present that, the desire inhabit a better live is the main driver for people, who commit the crimes. For example, citizens, who do not suffer from a illiteracy, are able to find work and provide their families with basic needs.
On the other hand, some negative points stem from growth of economy. One of the is that it leads people to become a materialist and they tend to increase their working hours. Therefore, people do not have enough time in order to expenditure together with their families. In terms of it, they do not care their children and binding force between family members break.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions and there both negative and positive aspect, in my point of view, improvement of economy have more advantages comparing disadvantages, such as reduction of poverty and crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00961538462 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76361424436 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.616793133 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138506754772 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389401095319 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442644057573 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821052300157 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388738091664 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.