Some people think that life experience is more important than the formal education provided in schools and universities. How far do you agree with this statement, and provide examples?
These days, there is an ongoing debate among people that life experience holds greater importance than formal education. while many people think that having the proper education in schools and colleges is must for the development of a child, others maintain that practical experiences in life teach great lessons to be successful. this essay will discuss the role played by the formal education in the development of a child and therefore is necessary.
The solid base is compulsory in building the tall and strong building, and similarly, for the holistic development of a person, formal education is a must. it equips a person with critical thinking ability, competitiveness, ability to handle failure and success and managing the time. For example, while studying in a school or a college, a student needs to manage study, projects and exams along with the other activities like sports and celebrating different festivals. As a result, a child develops different skills and maturity required in all stages of life.
Despite the fact that formal education is not replaceable, some people think that having practical experience is more beneficial. They are neglecting the necessity of having structured development a person which build a person to face all flavours of life. Real work makes someone an expert in the area only in which a person is working. For example, a person working on art would not be fully aware of how it can be marketed and taken the business to the next level. this sometimes stops the growth of a person.
formal education is providing many benefits in making a person ready to face the reality of life. In my opinion, formal education plays a pivotal role in the foundation of a successful person and hence it is far more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03401360544 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79082409928 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9101030634 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267348805826 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907174916324 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717217253506 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163277464747 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574844068674 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.