Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that the government should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility of sugar intake. What is your opinion on this? Discuss both views.
Excess intake of sugar is harmful for human body as it causes various diseases. It is though by few that state has to take the charge and enforce effective steps to control the amount of sugar consumption by the people, however, others opine that it is the duty of the individual to have proper check on his or her eating habits. I assert that it requires the joint effort of people and the government.
To begin with, considering the views of the people who argue that government has to control the problem of excess sugar consumption. They have reason to believe this, as the trend of buying ready made foods and drinks is becoming popular in recent year. So the problem of excess sugar in drink or beverages can not be tackle without government's support. Strict laws has to be enforce on the quality check of packed food and drinks that it must not contain the excess quantity of sugar. State has to give the instruction to the food department of the country for its popular implementation. Eatable purchased from outside especially, drinks like juices and cold drinks contain high amount of saturated sugar which is exorbitantly harmful for the health.
On the other hand, the problem can be resolved to greater extend if citizen become more wise and responsible, while making their food choose. It is indispensable for government to control the sugar intake, if the individuals is not concern about their own health. People have to opt for healthy eating habits like cooking food at home and taking the sugar in its nature form. For instance fruits have the sugar in its natural form which is not bad for the health, whereas saturated or artificially added flavor have numerous negative ramification on health and causes diseases like obesity and diabetics.
In conclusion, unequivocally high consumption of sugar have many adverse effects, but it can be control by the proper check of packed food sand drinks by the authorities. However, has to take the wiser choice while in taking any food or drink
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86046511628 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59669674092 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502906976744 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3928566366 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187401488759 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733362516773 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473625341874 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125998693647 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170785840937 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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