Newspaper and magazine will not be available in near future because large amount of information from the internet will replace them do you agree or disagree
In this technological world,technology has been increasing day by day in each and every corner.we can get information about anything and we can see what is happening in the world with the help of internet.nowadays we are see news in internet and newspapers and magazines have been getting closed day by day,However newspaper and magazine have their own important.
Nowadays, people have become technosvvy and there are mass of people are very busy in their work. they don't have adequate amount of time to read a newspaper so most of the people get information from internet. internet gives a digital details of every second. they provide video news as compere to newspaper and magazine. they can not provide digital information and best things of this is paper could be saved. internet gives each and every details all our the world in some seconds
On the other hand,The number of people who still read newspapers and magazines most of the people start their morning with the newspaper and a cup of tea.it is part of their daily routine. newspaper is very cheaper rather than internet. The plethora amount of information can be provided to other people by newspaper due to they don't have adequate amount of details about internet. Moreover reading skills can be increased by reading newspaper.
In conclusion, newspaper and internet both are important in our life. newspaper store all the up date for long time so we can understand electronic media can not replace newspaper.
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...etails all our the world in some seconds On the other hand,The number of people w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, still, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99190283401 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81101138072 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48987854251 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.94367237 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179703463112 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776519072034 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478915979235 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116268186601 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279051690667 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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