Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people.
What do you think about this viewpoint?
with the passage of time, various lodgings has become available for travelling people. However, some persons believe that it is not helpful in learning about the country and inhabitants. In my viewpoint, staying in hotel can be both good and bad depending on aesthetics and workings of the place.
As for why people think it is not a good idea to stay in the hotel, there are umpteen reasons. The main one is that most of the tourist dwelling of present day are matched with the needs of worldwide public than host country environment which contributes to less awareness of the nations uniqueness. For instance, 5 star hotels in India often constructed while keeping the needs of worldwide audience in mind which leaves little space for cultural and traditional things.
However, I do not completely agree with this notion as there are some suits which help to keep the uniqueness of culture and traditions of the country. A fine example of this is Ryokan - a traditional Japanese inn which typically features tatami-matted rooms, communal baths and several other facilities such as allowing people to wear national cloth (Yukata) and so on. In addition, it is much easier to live in a hotel with colleagues and fellow tourists then the native people who are stranger to every traveller. Beside this, there are many other ways of gaining knowledge about the country and its indigenous population like visiting historical places, meeting native people, reading books and etcetera.
To end, whether to stay in the hotel or the live-in facilities provided by native people, it is a persons choice than the public. As, everyone feel comfort in different environments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it is a persons choice than the public. As, everyone feel comfort in different env...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, while, as for, for instance, in addition, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05072463768 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7010945161 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1835423016 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273216283266 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891293917475 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721675177343 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142758973561 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482524172986 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.