Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In modern age, the lifestyle of youngster has dramatically altered at much rapid pace than before. In earlier time, they probably depend upon their ancesters for any decision, now a day it is found rare. The question arises whether they ought to inherit the traits of their senior or to practise their own plan into completion of their target.
In support of first argument people believe that the experienced people can give the suggestion which can solve the problem effectively. The problem may be out of understanding due to some exception which is often come unfortunately, a piece of advice by grey-haired person could be taken to sort out. Secondly, the examplery action of grands and our elders certainly have good source of motivation, that is realistic approach to lead the youth towards hardwork as they can easily relate themselves with their progenaters such as inherited qualities can be observed in the offspring while they spend their free time with elders. Some kids are really smart in handling the situation as they are feeded with good positive energy by aged family member and neighbours.
On the other side, somewhere they are unable to apply these all ideas into their current situation because of unsuitable strategies of old people. The youth of present can not work like them, they have to adapt some changes with development of whole science. Secondly, technology has been considerable marginalized the difference between them in aspect of knowledge. To cite an example, as per the research, it is found old people are not much adaptable with current technology, these circumstances are really new for them to lead any example in this
In conclusion, although elders have great source of knowledge and experience to mend our ways of life, the recent innovative ideas are come in their own, because occurernce of everything has new phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 693, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09415584416 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7527011068 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8982381137 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.636363636 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836408554745 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318652380746 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428859705399 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045427855138 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267774786792 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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