Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the mordent era women are pro active self independent as compare to past. There is no difference in men and women. People have different views about whether men and women should have equal responsibilities for household chores. I am completely agree with the statement. I believe that household work equally allocated for both husband and wives.
There are many reasons why both need to share their domestic responsibilities. Now the time women roles are gradually changing, women go to work instead of staying at home and bring up their children in the past. To exemplify , people of Canada and United States Of America work cooperatively and complete all house related activities in the shorter period and spend quality of time with each other.
furthermore, When couples share the responsibilities of domestic life, they set a good example for their children. Children raise in such families will learn the value of felling.
They will share the responsibilities with their respective partners when they will grow up.
For instance, after dinner, husbands can do clean floor and table while wives can do washing dishes.sharing the chores will make the couples closer in their relationship, resulting is quality of improving their marital life.
To sum up, I believe that working couples needs encouraged to share the responsibilities of their daily life. It is one of the important things to keep happy smooth running of life. <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">It is one of the important things to keep happy smooth running of life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s for household chores. I am completely agree with the statement. I believe that hous...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...their children in the past. To exemplify , people of Canada and United States Of A...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...end quality of time with each other. furthermore, When couples share the responsibilitie...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir relationship, resulting is quality of improving their marital life. To su...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ship, resulting is quality of improving their marital life. To sum up, I bel...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs encouraged" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'encouraging' or 'to be encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraging; to be encouraged
...p, I believe that working couples needs encouraged to share the responsibilities of their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.332 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35642178714 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6760170169 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167694688866 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064443451175 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587690059866 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675632532373 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765947709126 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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