In some places, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home.
Do you agree or disagree?
Children in their teenage are suffering from a lot of social issues in many areas. According to some, the reason for this is the absence of parents from their life as parents are busy with their job. I am of the opinion that the majority of the problems with teenagers are because of parents as they are not providing proper supervision and not giving enough time for moral teachings.
First, there is no doubt, parents play an important role in keeping check and balance on every activity of their children, especially in the teenage. But nowadays, parents are mostly busy with their hectic work routine that they are not able to supervise their children. Without restrictions and guardianship, children may involve in immoral activities. It is often reported that the most common reason for teenagers becoming a criminal is the absence of a parental guide from their life.
Second, it is commonly accepted that parents are the best teachers of their children. Most importantly, moral teachings can only be learned by spending time with parents and learn from their experiences. Teenagers can learn faster when it comes directly from their parents. If parents are not giving the required time to their children then it is a possibility that they will never get mature in tackling adult life problems in the future.
Finally, the lack of focus from parents to their children might also involve them in a bad company. In the absence of attachment from parents, children seek external sources to spend their time. In this age, teenagers are not able to differentiate between right and wrong, and the same applies to select a good friend. For example, it is quite common that children mostly introduced to bad activities from their friends.
In conclusion, there are a number of serious problems for teenagers such as involvement in criminal activities and surrounding themselves with bad company, the reason for this is that parents being busy in their work and not spending proper time with their children
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02089552239 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59549449403 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480597014925 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5295549501 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206377512169 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082676299571 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455079228109 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142644076933 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398653634011 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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