Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
700 hundred is not only the victims of terror in European 45 years but also the Viet Nam's death people in 1 month because of traffic accidents. As a result, many crucial pile-ups are the origin of congestion. The fatal social evil of back up is metamorphosed into an unabated burden because of the overpopulation and can be curtail by the letter of the law.
An inevitable truth dictates back up is a real and imminent menace. people are spending a multitude of time in tail back, which is the genesis of ignoring traffic lights and traffic policemen. A recent study claimed tat 70% people who live in metropolis is spending 3 hour a day to go around, transfer to work and go back home.
The culprit for this inadequacy is the different between the living standard in the countryside and the city. countryside people are now moving to the city to have a superior working condition. In addition, living standard in metropolis is elevated, lead to the overcharged of private vehicles.
it requires no tedious analysis to learn that the human morality takes an important role to this complication. Citizens should enforce law and the government should give the full weight of law to wrongdoers. Besides, encouraging people to use public transports is a extensive remedies to mitigate private cars and motorbikes.
Subsequently, weighing all the aforementioned, it can now be safely stated that traffic jam is a crucial social cancer that poses environmental degradation and this need to be settle the soonest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95669291339 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95987854848 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2985500064 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821063066388 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250862070304 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267553384474 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433754905774 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215611884817 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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