Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments and private companies should share their scientific discoveries with the rest of the world.
Sciences and discoveries of them an important until now and in the future.There were so many discoveries in the world before, and they will be many new types of discoveries which will have made by people.All of them are necessary and they could be used for everything which about a health, protection, income etc.
First of all, it is important for human's or animal's health care.Nowadays, there are so many bad sick conditions and problems which caused by different reasons.These reasons sometimes known but the most parts of these reasons are not known.Until today, many new health solutions discovered and they solved perfectly by vaccines or cures.These vaccines and cures created by humans concentratedly, and some others found randomly.All of these new activities should been used by all over the world.
Also, health problems could be spreaded rapidly if they are not solved quickly.All of These ill problems threat our world and people.And, for solving and treating our health problems we should share our new discoveries.Then, new findings are highly important than past ones, and their creator want to earn more money.For improving their incomes, they could share their new things.
In contrast, some of new discoveries used in the military actions which made by military factories and countries.So, these military products are more important than other products.Because they affects countries future, people's living conditions, or economic facilities.All countries or people make them secretly and they do not want them learning by other.
In my opinion, although there is one opposite reason which about military actions, all new discoveries should be shared by their owner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40754716981 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99563227796 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.544583744 48.9658058833 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.6 100.406767564 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.6045352989 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.4 5.45110844103 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984790383753 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065926879403 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355733917919 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065926879403 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355733917919 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 11.7677419355 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 58.1214874552 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.1575268817 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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